content(magic-stylix): minor improvements

Author: brckd

src/content/blog/magically-style-your-desktop-with-stylix.mdx

@@ -9,18 +9,16 @@ bannerAlt:
 tags: [linux, nixos, stylix]
 ---
 
-## The Stylix Story
-
-### Configuration hellscape
+## Configuration hellscape
 
 What's a better time to waste your own time than to customize your desktop?
 Heck, there are entire communities like
-[Unixporn](https://lemmy.world/c/unixporn) based around this hobby. I myself
-have spent countless months on this, as far back as
+[Unixporn](https://lemmy.world/c/unixporn) based around this hobby. I have spent
+countless months on this myself, as far back as
 [my first post about custom setups](/blog/my-first-custom-linux-setup). It can
-be really fun at first, but after the honeymoon phase is over, it quickly
-becomes tiring. The hardest part for me has always been configuring color
-schemes, because manualy doing so was a lot of efford.
+be really fun at first, but it can quickly become tiring. The hardest part for
+me has always been configuring color schemes, because manualy doing so was too
+much manual efford.
 
 In the configuration from the aforementioned post, I used Arch, which is famous
 for its customizability. There, I settled on using
@@ -38,7 +36,7 @@ color schemes. Nonetheless, this was still too much work for me, because it
 involved the manual step of finding out where to put the generated files for
 each application I was using.
 
-### Nix
+## Nix
 
 Nowadays, I'm not using Arch anymore. Instead I'm using another Linux-based
 operating system called NixOS. It is just as customizable as Arch, but it uses a
@@ -51,15 +49,15 @@ often uploaded to platforms like GitHub where it can be shared with others, e.g.
 in the form of so-called
 [Flakes](https://nixos-and-flakes.thiscute.world/nixos-with-flakes/introduction-to-flakes).
 
-### The solution
+## Stylix
 
 Bluntly put, [Stylix](https://stylix.danth.me) is just a Flake like every other
-Flake before it. But I think it's so much more, because it takes the core
-selling point of Nix and elevates it to another level! Similarily to Nix, Stylix
-takes your preferences and applies them anywhere you want. But Stylix does so
-with your styling preferences and to a variety of applications.
+Flake before it. But it can be so much more, because it takes the core selling
+point of Nix and elevates it to another level! Similarily to Nix, Stylix takes
+your preferences and applies them anywhere you want. But Stylix does so with
+your styling preferences and to a variety of applications.
 
-In contrast to the other tools I mentioned however, Stylix isn't just limited to
+And in contrast to the other tools I mentioned, Stylix isn't just limited to
 just color schemes: It can also do wallpapers, fonts and even icon packs. It
 doesn't even matter whether you're using GNOME, KDE, or Hyprland -- Stylix can
 probably already style your entire desktop. And if it doesn't, you can just
@@ -83,8 +81,7 @@ Stylix!
 
 ## Try it yourself
 
-If you are now as hyped about Stylix as I am, just head over to its
-documentation on the
+If you want to give Stylix a try, just head over to its documentation on the
 [installation process](https://stylix.danth.me/installation.html). Vimjoyer has
 also made [a great video](https://youtu.be/ljHkWgBaQWU) covering this process.
 Additionally, Stylix provides [testbeds](https://stylix.danth.me/testbeds.html)
@@ -93,5 +90,5 @@ these on any system with Nix installed, but be told that they might take some
 time to compile.
 
 This has been my first long-form blog post, so if you have any feedback or
-suggestions, make sure to [get in contact with me](/socials) until I implement a
+suggestions, make sure to [get in touch with me](/socials) until I implement a
 commenting feature :)